diff --git a/contact.part b/contact.part index 8b5a01b..2d34be5 100644 --- a/contact.part +++ b/contact.part @@ -2,8 +2,11 @@

We'd be happy to hear from you...

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a question, feedback, lunch invitation or anything you see fit. We're - human, but do out best to reply within two working days.

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+ a question, some feedback, a lunch invitation or anything you + see fit. We're human though, and will do out best to reply + within two working days. +

Or reach out in a traditional way

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- + Contact logo

diff --git a/index.part b/index.part index 3ca9d77..3827c06 100644 --- a/index.part +++ b/index.part @@ -10,20 +10,24 @@
- +

Web Hosting

- Low-footprint (static website), Wordpress and generic PHP hosting. + Low-footprint static website, Wordpress and + generic PHP hosting.

Learn more
- +

Storage

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Borg-based backup service and file syncing with NextCloud.

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+ Borg-based backup service and file syncing with + NextCloud. +

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Generic Hosting

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KVM virtual machines, running either one of our images or your - own.

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+ KVM virtual machines, running either one of our + images or your own. +

Learn more
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Members & Friends

We wish the Recycled Cloud to be backed by a multitude of small - organization, fighting against centralization and promoting a more - local and social IT. + organizations, fighting against centralization and promoting a more + local and humans-centered IT.

- + e-Durable logo
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    Donate unused hardware

    - ... or make sure you don't buy new ones for no good reason! + ... or make sure you don't buy any new without a good reason!

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    Join the federation!

    - We would gladly welcome new member organizations, helping them - helping us running the infrastructure running our Cloud. + We would gladly welcome new members, helping them help + us run the infrastructure running our Cloud.

@@ -127,8 +133,8 @@ The technical documentation of the Recycled Cloud is public and available under an open license. We build atop Free/Libre and Open Source Software in the most - open way we can find: there's no value in keeping it - for ourselves. + open way we can find: we find no value in keeping our + work for ourselves.

We are grateful for the many existing projects we use as building diff --git a/manifesto.part b/manifesto.part index 637f424..e7bdb16 100644 --- a/manifesto.part +++ b/manifesto.part @@ -4,16 +4,18 @@

Manifesto

- We are saddened by the state of the world, and role that IT - which, - for many of us, is our working field - is taking in it. We see the - current uses of these technologies as major social, political, - economical and ecological offender. They, however, are not going away - anytime soon, and are nonetheless formidable tools for human - communication. + We are saddened by the broken state of the world, and + the role that IT - which, for many of us, is our working + field - is taking in destroying it. We see the current + uses of IT technologies as major social, political, + economical and ecological offenders. However, computers + are not going away anytime soon, and are formidable + tools for human communication.

- This lets us not choice but to fight to bring them closer to our vision - of what, how and why they should be. + This leaves us with no choice but to fight to bring IT + infrastructure as close as possible to our vision of + what, how and why they should be.

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There is no such thing as 'green' or 'sustainable' IT.
- It will always require high-tech globalised insdustries, as well as - rare and hard to get resources. A maddening amount of those are throwed - away: we get (most of) our hardware from the second-hand market... and - landfills. We try to be the lesser evil but are not and will never be - 'green'. + IT will always require high-tech globalised insdustries, + as well as rare and hard to get resources. A maddening + amount of those are thrown away: we get (most of) our + hardware from the second-hand market... and landfills. + We try to be the lesser evil but are not and can never + be 'green'.

- IT and 'high tech' in general is not necessarly the right solution to a - problem. + + IT and 'high tech' in general are not necessarly the + right solution to a problem. +
- They are no different from any other tool*. You can't work around a - ill-defined problem by aimlessly throwing resources and 'solutions' - at it. + They are no different from any other tool. You + cannot work around an ill-defined problem by + aimlessly throwing resources and 'solutions' at + it.

- For the better or worse, we already live in a world controlled by - technology. + + For better or for worse, we already live in a + world controlled by technology. +
- We can't let an anyone size its control: we work in the open, with open - tools, gladly welcome anyone who want to join and don't lock them in. + We cannot let any single entity seize control of + our tech: we work in the open, with open tools, + gladly welcoming anyone who wants to join, not + locking them in our ecosystem.

- We fight against the use of technology as a mean of control an - manipulation. + + We fight against the use of technology as a mean + of control and manipulation. +
- We fight against centralization, both from technical and governance - reasons. We are not one, but a federation of small hosting providers - with similar ideology. + We fight against centralization, both for + technical and governance reasons. We are not one + company, but a federation of small hosting + providers with similar ideology.

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- + Generic Hosting - Virtual Machines

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We offer unmanaged Virtual Machines (VMs), which can run either - one of our images our yor own. We currently have images ready for + one of our images our your own. We currently have images ready for Debian GNU/Linux, Ubuntu GNU/Linux and Alpine Linux, but other distributions and *BSD can be defined on demand.